So I'm getting married in a few days and my fiance decided she wanted to do our own vowels which doesn't leave me much time to prepare one. But here is one that needs critiquing. I'm not sure if it has the type of content that is appropriate but here it is:
When we first met, I couldn't wait to see you again
When we started dating, I couldn't hold you...and kiss you
After 3 months, I couldn't wait to tell you I love you
After 1 1/2 years, I couldn't wait to marry you
And now, as I place this ring on your figure, I cant wait to start a family with you and share a lifetime with you
What do you guys think?? It seems like im missing something at the end
Thanks in advance!!
When we first met, I couldn't wait to see you again
When we started dating, I couldn't hold you...and kiss you
After 3 months, I couldn't wait to tell you I love you
After 1 1/2 years, I couldn't wait to marry you
And now, as I place this ring on your figure, I cant wait to start a family with you and share a lifetime with you
What do you guys think?? It seems like im missing something at the end
Thanks in advance!!