Beautiful bracelet! In my opinion, I don't think it is too long visually. What makes you think that way or does it get caught on items?
I inherited a tennis bracelet and it was too long. I asked a local jewelry to remove 7 stones and then make a bar necklace. After the change, it still feels like it can freely move up and down the wrist. Perhaps something to consider if your hesitation is what to do with the stones?
I have a Garmin watch where the band is rubber. The bracelet would still occasionally sneak below the watch or hit the side that does have a metal button. I'm too OCD about getting my things banged up so I don't wear it with my watch. I'm also the gal who doesn't even wear a wedding band with my e-ring though so I'm just extra sensitive. Per Instagram though, I've seen plenty of ladies who do wear it with their watch though!