Guilty Pleasure
Brilliant_Rock
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Hello all! I know there are a million threads and internet articles out there, but I don''t know which ones to trust... I don''t want to "do what I want to do because I''m the bride" in this case! I would like to have a formal invitation with the "right" wording, so I need to know what I can and cant do. Here''s what I have:
Mr. and Mrs. dadfirst dadmiddle dadlast
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
myfirst mymiddle
to
FIfirst FImiddle FIlast
Lieutenant, United States Navy
son of
Mr. and Mrs. first middle last
on Saturday, the eighteenth of July
Two thousand and nine
at five o''clock
church name
123 Carter Creek Parkway
Bryan, Texas
Questions:
!. Are the words, "on" and "at" necessary, or can I drop them? Right now, it kind of reads like one big long sentence without puncuation. I think it''s supposed to be like that, but I didn''t know if I could deviate from that.
2. Do I have to write, "in the afternoon" after the time for it to be proper? I think five o''clock in the afternoon sounds a little silly, but evening doesn''t start until 6.
Thanks guys!!
Mr. and Mrs. dadfirst dadmiddle dadlast
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
myfirst mymiddle
to
FIfirst FImiddle FIlast
Lieutenant, United States Navy
son of
Mr. and Mrs. first middle last
on Saturday, the eighteenth of July
Two thousand and nine
at five o''clock
church name
123 Carter Creek Parkway
Bryan, Texas
Questions:
!. Are the words, "on" and "at" necessary, or can I drop them? Right now, it kind of reads like one big long sentence without puncuation. I think it''s supposed to be like that, but I didn''t know if I could deviate from that.
2. Do I have to write, "in the afternoon" after the time for it to be proper? I think five o''clock in the afternoon sounds a little silly, but evening doesn''t start until 6.
Thanks guys!!