revised vows thanks to the ps girls ( what do you think)

[blissfulbride]

I love you ( )
and because I do, I want to grow old with you for the rest of my life.
I will share in your dreams, and support you as you strive to achieve your goals.

I vow to listen to you with compassion and understanding,
and speak to you with encouragement.

I promise to help you when you need it, and step aside when you don''t.

I will always cherish our relationship regardless of the obstacles we will face.And be willing to make any changes necessary to keep us happy.

I vow to always be the person, who you can trust and confide in.

I will stand by your side as we build our lives, and our future family.

I look forward to the life we have planned together, and today I take my place as your (husband/wife).

Take this ring as the symbol that you are mine, I am yours, and together we are one.

 

[Clairitek]

Your vows sound very heart-felt!

 

[PilsnPinkysMom]

Very sweet

 

[VRBeauty]

Beautiful!

The only change I'd suggest is to separate the "grow old with you" and "for the rest of my life" ideas.

You will grow old(er) for the rest of your life with or without your sweetie. You don't want to suggest that your sweetie will somehow influence or hasten that.

 

[tlh]

love love love the last line........LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!

 

[Dannielle]

Date: 3/26/2009 3:45:52 PM
Author: VRBeauty
Beautiful!

The only change I''d suggest is to separate the ''grow old with you'' and ''for the rest of my life'' ideas.

You will grow old(er) for the rest of your life with or without your sweetie. You don''t want to suggest that your sweetie will somehow influence or hasten that.

Agreed.

I love the last line, it brought a tear to my eye

 

[mrscushion]

I love your vows!