Wedding New proofs - much better!

[buttercup80]

What do you think? New invite: (sorry, I know it's hard to see with all the blurring)

Oops - sorry. . .I can't make it upload right now and I have to go to work

I'll have to try again later.

 

[buttercup80]

Trying again:

 

[buttercup80]

and the response card:

 

[buttercup80]

Okay, so I''m not all good with the blurring - and you can probably all see right through that. Please don''t crash my wedding - we can''t afford any extra people!

 

[Stephanie]

It looks better than the justified way that it was. I really like that font. And I can''t see a thing.

 

[lliang_chi]

Looks great! What happened to the Dinner & Merriment line? I thought that was cute.

 

[havernell]

Much better than the awkward spacing on the first proof! Glad you were able to get it fixed. One little thing that still looks a bit off to me however is how far your name and your FI's name is from the "and" in-between your names. I can see leaving some space in there, but maybe not quite as much.

ETA: Actually, looking at it again, the spacing is growing on me, so maybe forget what I said above. I think the spacing highlights your names, which is what you want on your wedding invitation.

 

[buttercup80]

Thanks ladies!

I think the spacing looks SO much better - I''m glad it looks okay centered. . .

Stephanie, I guess it just looks easy to read to me since I know what it says.

havernell, "dinner and merriment" was a casualty of a battle with my mom.