Wedding Invite wording draft.. what do you think ???

[BrownEyedCountryGirl]

I posted earlier looking for ideas and suggestions regarding the wording for a wedding being hosting by the Bride, Groom and the Bride''s Children..

I have been researching all day and finally found the one I loved months ago... took forever !!

Anyways, the situation is, these are my children from a previous relationship, I was never married, and my FI absolutely LOVES and adores my children and they are like his own.

My little girls are seven and five and are absolutely on top of the moon about our upcoming wedding and will be a huge part of our day. We are even considering saying vows to them and havingthem a part of the ceremony...

Here is the wording I found and really liked.

I would like to know your opnions and thoughts..

Thanks in advance...

Through marriage we are given
the gift of a new beginning,
a new family and a new life
We,
BRIDE''S FIRST MIDDLE LAST NAME
and
GROOM''S FIRST MIDDLE LAST NAME
along with
CHILDREN''S NAMES
invite you to witness
our beautiful beginnings
on DAY, the FORMAL DATE of MONTH
YEAR
at FORMAL TIME o''clock in the TIME OF DAY
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE

 

[Cleopatra]

I LOVE the wording for that! So personal, unique, and really shouts FAMILY! I love it!

 

[BrownEyedCountryGirl]

That''s EXACTLY how I felt about it !!!

I thought *maybe* I would only see it that way because.. well, I AM THE BRIDE AND A MOM !!!