Wedding Final Invite Proof-please review

[iwannaprettyone]

Ok, I''m citing Willie coz it''s my wedding and that what I wanna do...if the MLA or APA police want to come and bust me I am cool with that! lol

Anyway I need to take these to the printers today, so please please comment on wording/ design etc !!!

Thanks so much fellow pser''s!!

 

[iwannaprettyone]

praying it''s bigger....

 

[Stephanie]

Oh, they look good. And I love that quote.. This is purely grammatical, but I don''t think that the six in six o''clock needs to be capitalized. I could be totally wrong on that though..

 

[Haven]

LOVE the invites, iwanna!

Ditto on nixing the capitalized Six.

Are you marrying in a church or other religious venue? If so, everything else looks great. If not, it should read "request the pleasure of your company" instead of "honour of your presence".

Beautiful choice. The final product is going to look amazing.

 

[iwannaprettyone]

Do you think the text should be smaller?

 

[Haven]

I think the text is a perfect size, it looks lovely to me.

 

[Stephanie]

Date: 6/25/2008 12:12:35 PM
Author: iwannaprettyone
Do you think the text should be smaller?

It looks like the size fits perfectly on the card.. Have you tried just printing it out on a regular sheet to see how big it really is?

 

[musey]

Date: 6/25/2008 12:01:59 PM
Author: Haven

Are you marrying in a church or other religious venue? If so, everything else looks great. If not, it should read ''request the pleasure of your company'' instead of ''honour of your presence''.

That was the first thing that jumped out at me. See, you''ve taught me at least one thing, Haven! A year ago I wouldn''t have known the difference!

 

[SarahLovesJS]

Date: 6/25/2008 1:22:53 PM
Author: musey

Date: 6/25/2008 12:01:59 PM

Author: Haven


Are you marrying in a church or other religious venue? If so, everything else looks great. If not, it should read ''request the pleasure of your company'' instead of ''honour of your presence''.

That was the first thing that jumped out at me. See, you''ve taught me at least one thing, Haven! A year ago I wouldn''t have known the difference!

Thritto on that one and the six thing. Don''t make the text smaller, it looks great! You don''t want to create a bunch of open space.

 

[iwannaprettyone]

I hope that real thing looks fab!